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Wednesday 28 June 2017

haunted house.

                 

                                   Plan
Who: Isabella,Jack,Fau,Aden
What: they went into a haunted house.
Where: into a haunted house.

When in the night time.

One day Isabella went to  get her friends then she said should we go into a haunted house. they said all right they said and found the place and it was big and scary for Fau. because she doesn't like scary stuff she said ok let’s go in jack brought a touch to go through. it with them and aden brought food on the way and then they saw something at the back of them
They turned around  and saw a ghost and went inside and stayed in there  and one came out and said all clear they saw a woman hanging on top of the roof and she was real and they went down stairs and when they went the next room and saw a shadow when they went in there and they saw a tall thin person in front of them and jack said said "slender man" and ran and Fau got taken by slender man she said "ahhh" and left
they and Jack saw slender man and Fau walking and flowed Fau and slender man and she screamed and ran back and to Jack aden Isabelle and they had to run away from slender man and they got away from slender man and went back home.

I learnt how to write a narrative and it is a made up story
and to write a narrative quickly

LI: To plan and write narratives quickly.

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