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Friday 16 June 2017

Baby Bear



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1st mummy bear caught a salmon and then a bird took the salmon and They had to find something different to eat  and Mummy bear  did find berries and then they  went to sea and got a sea lion  and went back to the cave and they were still hungry
They went back out to get something to eat and they got a snaper
And the snapper was big like a tree
And a little fish is small like a rock



 
LI: To use complex sentences.
LI To write a narrative.I learnt how to write a simile  and compound sentence in my narrative.I learn by remembering that a narrative has a  simile and a compound.


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