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Friday 23 June 2017

Floating Island

                                     Title-Floating Island
One day a little girl was walking down a street.And saw a floating Island then there was a ladder to get up there. And he knew it was hunted like other different places. So when she went in there she saw someone touching her back of.Her when she turned around   then she saw a ghost walking past her. And she was following the ghost and the ghost went to a treasure room and the ghost disappeared
and I got how much gold and treasure in the room Little girl
found A bag then I put gold in and treasure in it.

When Little girl got out of the floating Island it fail down and gold was coming out of it and then the little girl had to run so the gold was coming out and when she got to her house she told her mum and dad and Grandpa Nana that she said they are rich now they went into town and bought  a house and they were so happy because they were rich.

                                          Plan         Title-floating island
Who: Little Girl,Mum,Dad,Nana,
Where: up in the sky far away from land.
What: what is happening the little girl was going into the floating island.
How: little girl found a floating island and went into it and took gold.
Why: The Little Girl wanted to be rich because they were poor.
 


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