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Friday 26 May 2017

Baby bear

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Title
Baby bear
Orientation

Mum and baby bear went to go hunting and when they went baby sudintle baby bear walked of to a cliff to jump of the cliff
And jumped in the water and the mum said what when he went passed.
Problem

The problem was there was 2 sharks in the pool and he tried to get him but he had to swim to mummy and 1 of the sharks came
And tried to get him he went passed to nearly tried to get him and he finally got out of the water and started hunting they walked out of the cave and then they saw a tiger and they ran back in the cave and mummy said stay i n the cave and he did and was playing by himself and then he got bored a then he fell asleep
And when he woke up and there was a monster in front of him
And he wanted to go back to sleep and he did then he woke up again and his mummy was in front of him and said dinner is ready and baby bear woke up and said what do you have.
Events

1st mummy bear caught a salmon and then a bird took the salmon and They had to find something different to eat  and Mummy bear  did find berries and then they  went to sea and got a sea lion  and went back to the cave and they were still hungry
They went back out to get something to eat and they got a snaper
And went back home and had  it then they went to bed and  woke and went back out to get water and went out for a walk to the wild and mummy bear went out to fight and mummy bear won and ate the guts out of the other bear  they cept walking and found another  bear and had another fight and went back home
To got to bed.


 
Solution

Baby bear woke and heard a funny nose outside and he went outside and he found a cute polar bear and they went in side
And played and went to bed


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