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Friday, 5 May 2017

A poor shot

Title-  A poor shot
What could the new title be?  The lucky arrow

Orientation

WHEN? A sunny day

WHERE? The wood’s and the kingdom

HOW? William, father, brothers, old man


Problem? William Could not shoot well and he kept missing it. And his brothers kept  laughing at him.

Events!
One day William and his brothers and his dad had to go hunting they walked and his brothers went first  
When it was Williams turn and he missed it.

William and he cepted missing it and his brothers cepted laughing at him and he cried  and he ran away
Into the woods  and his brothers and his dad was calling out WILLIAM and where are you and they said.


They went out hunting again  and the father told them to not laughing any more and a old man came along and he looked cold and hungry William gave him a coat and some food he walked away.

Could not find him he was angry with his brothers and he went back kingdom and his brothers were sad he got lost but he came and his father was so pleased

Resolution  and when he shot it he missed it again  and the old man a lucky stone and he put it in his pocket
And forgot all about it.

Ending when they went hunting the next day he looked in his pocket and the gem was still in his pocket when it was William turn he shoot a deer and he was so happy for him self

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