Baby bear

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Title	Baby bear
Orientation	Mum and baby bear went to go hunting and when they went baby sudintle baby bear walked of to a cliff to jump of the cliff And jumped in the water and the mum said what when he went passed.
Problem	The problem was there was 2 sharks in the pool and he tried to get him but he had to swim to mummy and 1 of the sharks came And tried to get him he went passed to nearly tried to get him and he finally got out of the water and started hunting they walked out of the cave and then they saw a tiger and they ran back in the cave and mummy said stay i n the cave and he did and was playing by himself and then he got bored a then he fell asleep And when he woke up and there was a monster in front of him And he wanted to go back to sleep and he did then he woke up again and his mummy was in front of him and said dinner is ready and baby bear woke up and said what do you have.
Events	1st mummy bear caught a salmon and then a bird took the salmon and They had to find something different to eat  and Mummy bear  did find berries and then they  went to sea and got a sea lion  and went back to the cave and they were still hungry They went back out to get something to eat and they got a snaper And went back home and had  it then they went to bed and  woke and went back out to get water and went out for a walk to the wild and mummy bear went out to fight and mummy bear won and ate the guts out of the other bear  they cept walking and found another  bear and had another fight and went back home To got to bed.
Solution	Baby bear woke and heard a funny nose outside and he went outside and he found a cute polar bear and they went in side And played and went to bed

Questioning & Predicting

Predicting

Qusetioning

Raz Kids

Title

Raz Kids

What did you learn?

I learnt to how to be elventeen

Learning Intention

2 read books

How did you learn?

I learnt how to be elenventeen when I grow up

Embedded Digital Learning Object

Interesting people and characters

[Claudia] Show, Don't Tell

                                  

Tell It looks like it’s going to aim at someone. It looks like it's transforming into a demean.

Show A  robot The robot is searching for a person and going to kill it .

Garbage dreams

Title

Garbage dreams

Learning Intention

The waste of rubbish

What did you learn?

I learnt all about picking up rubbish and putting it in the bin

Embedded Digital Learning Object

A baby falling of a cliff

Blogging Template

Title	A baby falling of a cliff
Learning Intention	To plan a narrative
What did you learn?	I learned to write narrative recount, narrative, simple sentences, paragraphs
How did you learn?	I learned about  simple sentences
Embedded Digital Learning Object
Labels	Writing	recount, narrative, simple sentences,  paragraphs

Waste Photos

Title	Waste Photos
Learning Intention	To learn about the amount of waste we produce
What did you learn?	I learnt that how much rubbish we put in the rubbish every day at school and in public
How did you learn?	I learnt it by working in a group and sorting out the amount of rubbish on the plastic bag.
Embedded Digital Learning Object

Reduce,Reuse and recyle

QAR

Claudia Story Wed Template

Title- a Birthday cake for grandma

What could a new title be? A sad day for grandma

Orientation

WHO? Grandmama,Mum,Lucy,Josh

WHEN? A sunny day

WHERE? House,Outside

Problem? It took them too long to chose a cake to make

Events!

Mum is picking some flowers for grandma they all went back inside to chose a cake so they picked “Carrot cake.

When it was done they suggest to make some cupcakes for Lucy and Josh and when the cake came out they put the cupcake in Lucy did the frosting.

Josh did the frosting for the cupcakes and when they all came and they went to watch tv for a little bit and

They had dinner and then went to bed

When they woke up they had breakfast and went to

The park and went to the  shop to buy milk they came

Back home and watch tv and they fell asleep when they got up they got ready to go the grave mum got her Flowers to go.

Resolution

When they went into the car they were so excited to go

To grandma and see her.

Ending when they got there they put the  flowers down

And had something to eat with here and the put some cake down and a cupcake for grandma

What is Place Value

A poor shot

Title-  A poor shot

What could the new title be?  The lucky arrow

Orientation

WHEN? A sunny day

WHERE? The wood’s and the kingdom

HOW? William, father, brothers, old man

Problem? William Could not shoot well and he kept missing it. And his brothers kept  laughing at him.

Events!

One day William and his brothers and his dad had to go hunting they walked and his brothers went first  

When it was Williams turn and he missed it.

William and he cepted missing it and his brothers cepted laughing at him and he cried  and he ran away

Into the woods  and his brothers and his dad was calling out WILLIAM and where are you and they said.

They went out hunting again  and the father told them to not laughing any more and a old man came along and he looked cold and hungry William gave him a coat and some food he walked away.

Could not find him he was angry with his brothers and he went back kingdom and his brothers were sad he got lost but he came and his father was so pleased

Resolution  and when he shot it he missed it again  and the old man a lucky stone and he put it in his pocket

And forgot all about it.

Ending when they went hunting the next day he looked in his pocket and the gem was still in his pocket when it was William turn he shoot a deer and he was so happy for him self

The Lorax

L.I:

To identify the responsibility, causation and connection on the issue.

I learned about to take care of the world  and keep it safe of our future. I had to work with a partner and we had to right evidence about why not cut down trees is important because it is natural animals.