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Wednesday, 10 May 2017

Claudia Story Wed Template

Title- a Birthday cake for grandma

What could a new title be? A sad day for grandma

Orientation
WHO? Grandmama,Mum,Lucy,Josh

WHEN? A sunny day

WHERE? House,Outside

Problem? It took them too long to chose a cake to make

Events!
Mum is picking some flowers for grandma they all went back inside to chose a cake so they picked “Carrot cake.

When it was done they suggest to make some cupcakes for Lucy and Josh and when the cake came out they put the cupcake in Lucy did the frosting.

Josh did the frosting for the cupcakes and when they all came and they went to watch tv for a little bit and
They had dinner and then went to bed

When they woke up they had breakfast and went to
The park and went to the  shop to buy milk they came
Back home and watch tv and they fell asleep when they got up they got ready to go the grave mum got her Flowers to go.

Resolution
When they went into the car they were so excited to go
To grandma and see her.

Ending when they got there they put the  flowers down
And had something to eat with here and the put some cake down and a cupcake for grandma

Friday, 5 May 2017

What is Place Value

A poor shot

Title-  A poor shot
What could the new title be?  The lucky arrow

Orientation

WHEN? A sunny day

WHERE? The wood’s and the kingdom

HOW? William, father, brothers, old man


Problem? William Could not shoot well and he kept missing it. And his brothers kept  laughing at him.

Events!
One day William and his brothers and his dad had to go hunting they walked and his brothers went first  
When it was Williams turn and he missed it.

William and he cepted missing it and his brothers cepted laughing at him and he cried  and he ran away
Into the woods  and his brothers and his dad was calling out WILLIAM and where are you and they said.


They went out hunting again  and the father told them to not laughing any more and a old man came along and he looked cold and hungry William gave him a coat and some food he walked away.

Could not find him he was angry with his brothers and he went back kingdom and his brothers were sad he got lost but he came and his father was so pleased

Resolution  and when he shot it he missed it again  and the old man a lucky stone and he put it in his pocket
And forgot all about it.

Ending when they went hunting the next day he looked in his pocket and the gem was still in his pocket when it was William turn he shoot a deer and he was so happy for him self

The Lorax

L.I:

To identify the responsibility, causation and connection on the issue.
I learned about to take care of the world  and keep it safe of our future. I had to work with a partner and we had to right evidence about why not cut down trees is important because it is natural animals.

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