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It looks like it’s going to aim at someone.
It looks like it's transforming into a demean.
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I am a Year 5 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 1 and my teachers are Mr Ogilvie and Mr Wong
Friday, 19 May 2017
[Claudia] Show, Don't Tell
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writing
Garbage dreams
Title
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Garbage dreams
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Learning Intention
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The waste of rubbish
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What did you learn?
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I learnt all about picking up rubbish and putting it in the bin
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Embedded Digital Learning Object
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Inquiry
Friday, 12 May 2017
A baby falling of a cliff
Blogging Template
Title
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A baby falling of a cliff
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Learning Intention
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To plan a narrative
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What did you learn?
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I learned to write narrative recount, narrative, simple sentences, paragraphs
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How did you learn?
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I learned about simple sentences
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Embedded Digital Learning Object
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recount, narrative, simple sentences, paragraphs
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Labels:
writing
Waste Photos
Title
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Waste Photos
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Learning Intention
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To learn about the amount of waste we produce
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What did you learn?
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I learnt that how much rubbish we put in the rubbish every day at school and in public
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How did you learn?
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I learnt it by working in a group and sorting out the amount of rubbish on the plastic bag.
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Embedded Digital Learning Object
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Inquiry
Thursday, 11 May 2017
Wednesday, 10 May 2017
Claudia Story Wed Template
Title- a Birthday cake for grandma
What could a new title be? A sad day for grandma
Orientation
WHO? Grandmama,Mum,Lucy,Josh
WHEN? A sunny day
WHERE? House,Outside
Problem? It took them too long to chose a cake to make
Events!
Mum is picking some flowers for grandma they all went back inside to chose a cake so they picked “Carrot cake.
When it was done they suggest to make some cupcakes for Lucy and Josh and when the cake came out they put the cupcake in Lucy did the frosting.
Josh did the frosting for the cupcakes and when they all came and they went to watch tv for a little bit and
They had dinner and then went to bed
When they woke up they had breakfast and went to
The park and went to the shop to buy milk they came
Back home and watch tv and they fell asleep when they got up they got ready to go the grave mum got her Flowers to go.
Resolution
When they went into the car they were so excited to go
To grandma and see her.
Ending when they got there they put the flowers down
And had something to eat with here and the put some cake down and a cupcake for grandma
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Reading
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